Can you please tell me what you think of my philosophy??It would really help my future?

I think that is an incredibly deep and observant take on the human experience. I'd just caution you that there is a lot more to life than thinking about life; I guess that's just one philosophy against another though : p. If you are fixed on philosophy you might want to read some of the well known big hitters like Hume, Kant, Descartes, Ree and Locke. It helps convey your point to others and impresses dimwits like the first poster.